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folks, individuals 替换 people, persons

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positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good

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dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的) 替换 bad。如果bad做表语，可以用 be less impressive 替换

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approach / method 替换掉 way（方法，方案）

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promote / strengthen 替换掉 improve （提高，加强）

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harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 替换掉 think

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alleviate 替换 relieve (缓解）

alleviate pain 缓解疼痛；止痛。 例如：

One of the long-standing mysteries surrounding acupuncture is why the technique only seems to alleviate pain if needles are inserted at specific points.

长期以来关于针灸的一个未解之谜是：为什么只有在特定的点插针才能减轻疼痛。

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n****evertheless 替换掉 however（然而，不过）

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reap benefits 替换 get / have benefits。例如：

You’ll soon begin to reap the benefits of being fitter.

你很快就会体会到身体更健康带来的好处。

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for my part, from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

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increasing(ly), growing 替换 more and more

**注意：**increasing / growing是形容词，用于修饰名词；increasingly是副词，修饰形容词和动词。注意没有growingly这种形式。例如：

Sth has gained growing popularity.

Sth. is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

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relevant 替换掉 related （有关的，相关的）

我们可以说 sth. is highly relevant to… 例如：

Nursing work is a commitment to human health service. Nurses’ job satisfaction is highly relevant to the health care service quality, work efficiency, turnover and patients’ satisfaction with nursing care.

护理工作是致力于人类健康的服务性工作。护士对工作的满意程度与医疗服务质量、工作效率、护士离职率及病人满意度高度相关。

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rewarding 替换 helpful 和 beneficial。例如：

Life for the successful doctor can be emotionally and financially rewarding.

对于事业有成的医生来说，生活在精神和物质两方面都能令人满足。

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fundamental / significant 替换掉 important

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exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替换 very

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adopt 替换掉 use （采用，采取）

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sth. appeals to sb., sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb. 替换 sb. take interest in / sb. be interested in

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capture / attract one’s attention 替换 draw one’s attention.

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facet, dimension 替换 aspect （方面）。例如：

Now let’s lood at the other facet of the problem.

现在我们来看看问题的另一面。

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distinguished / prestigious 替换 famous

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give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger（该词为五星级用法） 替换掉 cause（导致）

It is hoped the procedure will trigger an immune response that will wipe out HIV-infected cells while leaving non-infected cells unharmed.

希望这一治疗会激发免疫反应，清除感染了艾滋病病毒的细胞，同时又不损伤未感染细胞。

trigger 还可以做名词，表示“原因；诱因”。例如：

Stress may act as a trigger for these illnesses.

压力可能会成为引发这些疾病的原因。

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cultivate 替代 develop。例如：

Cultivating a positive mental attitude towards yourself can reap tremendous benefits.

培养一种自信的积极心态会让人受益匪浅。

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the aged / senior citizens 替换 old people（老人）

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adolescents 替换 the young （青少年）

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devote … to sth. 替换 spend …in sth. 例如：

He spends all his spare time in reading.

→ He devote all his spare time to reading.

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grumble about 替换 complain of （抱怨）

They grumble about how hard they have to work.

他们抱怨自己工作得很辛苦。

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in the course of 替换 during

In the course of the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.

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frown on sth. 替换 be against , disagree with sth. , disapprove of sth.

frown这个词的意思是“皱眉”，frown on sth.对什么事情皱眉头，也就是对某事不满，反对某事的意思。

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attend to 替换 look after / take care of

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occasionally / once in while 替换 sometimes

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as a matter of fact 替换 in fact

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demonstrate 替换 show （说明，表明）

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massive 替换 big

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ruin / devastate 替换 destroy。例如：

The mentioned side effects of these treatments can devastate a patient physically and emotionally.

上述治疗的副作用能够对患者的生理及心理造成严重的影响。

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hazardous 替换 harmful / dangerous

hazardous air pollutant 有害的空气污染物

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currently 替换 nowadays

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unique 替换 only

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emerge 替换 appear / occur （出现），而且emerge 更强调（从困境或不好的经历中）摆脱出来，熬出来。例如：

There is growing evidence that the economy is at last emerging from recession.

有越来越多的证据表明经济终于开始摆脱萧条。

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cautious 替换 careful

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capability 替换 ability