英语作文中最容易被忽略的 10 个小细节

小白老师说：对于考博英语写作，现在大家都知道要背万能句、做高级同义词替换了，但是由于基础不扎实，写出来的东西过于随意、不规范，也很难拿到好的分数。今天小白老师就来总结一下英语作文的十个容易被忽略的小细节，写不好会送命，写好了能救命。

错误类型 1：结构不平行

I was able to raise my English score by studying hard and I read lots of books.

当使用连词 and 将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。

错误类型 2： 不知所云

Many hospitals began using computers mouth.

错误类型 3：段落过长，不分段；主谓不一致

She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.

主语和动词在数方面不一致。

错误类型 4：句子别扭

We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.

措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。

**错误类型 5：**在正式的写作中了使用紧缩形式，如：can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve 等等。

注意：在正式的学术写作中应当使用单词的完整形式，如：can not，do not，it is，we will，they have 等等。

错误类型 6：关联词语重复

Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.

注意：不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。

错误类型 7：句子不完整

Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.

这个句子没有主要主语或动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。

错误类型 8：用词欠妥

When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed.

解析：Get 太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式写作。应将 get 改成一个更加具体的单词，如 become, receive, find, achieve 等等。

错误类型 9： 信息不正确

I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.

句子表达的信息明显不正确。上面这个错误例句中，all 的意思是百分之百；我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的，所以这个句子不妥。为保险起见，可以使用 many 或 most。

错误类型 10：介词多余

I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.

注意：介词不能与副词连用。小白老师发现很多考生会在 downtown，home，there，here 等副词前面加介词，这种错误真的很普遍。

有则改之无则加勉，这 10 个英文写作小错误，你中招了吗？