高大上的作文题写得够多了,是时候来篇接地气的了!

小白老师2022/02/17英语学习

摘要: “公共场所是否应禁烟”是一个长期未出现在全国医学博士英语统考中的现实性作文命题,聚焦二手烟对公众健康的危害与个人吸烟自由之间的冲突,具有较强的社会讨论价值和写作训练意义。

  • 近20年全国医博英语作文题多围绕健康议题,但“公共场所禁烟”尚未被考查。
  • 二手烟含有7000多种化学物质,其中约70种为致癌物,对非吸烟者构成明确健康威胁。
  • 支持禁烟的理由包括保护公共健康、降低医疗负担和维护环境整洁;反对意见则强调个人自由与对服务业的经济影响。
  • 写作时可采用“现象—正反分析—个人观点”结构,并结合权威数据增强说服力。
  • 该话题贴近生活、素材丰富,适合作为备考中的重点练习题目。

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小白老师说:纵观近20年的全国统考作文题,有一个很接地气的题目还没有考过,“公共场所是否要禁烟”。本文给出该主题作文的实用万能句。万一考到,有备无患。

首先把历年作文题给大家汇总一下:

  • 2021年 健康中国政策
  • 2020年 抗生素滥用(已命中)
  • 2019年 我国食品安全的现状、问题及对策(已命中)
  • 2018年 未来医学发展趋势
  • 2017年 环境污染与肺癌(已命中)
  • 2016年 全科医生培养及发展思路
  • 2015年 什么是健康
  • 2014年 学会呼吸可长寿
  • 2013年 健康处方帮你走出“第三状态”
  • 2012年 电脑、网络与健康
  • 2011年 吃出健康
  • 2010年 新兴学科:药物心理学
  • 2009年 水果是否可吃可不吃
  • 2008年 珍爱生命从护心开始
  • 2007年 手术与术前恐慌
  • 2006年 走路与健康
  • 2005年 艾滋病是全社会的威胁
  • 2004年 入世后看病如何挑医院
  • 2003年 健康从早餐开始
  • 2002年 如何保持充沛的精力
  • 2001年 如何在冬季进行体育锻炼
  • 2000年 健康教育
  • 1999年 全科医学

纵观这 20 多年的全国统考作文题,发现一个很接地气的题目还没有考过:

是否在公共场所禁烟?

Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places?

“吸烟与健康”、“吸烟与危害”是老生常谈,但“是否要在公共场所禁烟”则另辟蹊径。

请大家在 50 分钟之内,按医学博士英语统考命题作文的要求写一篇250词的命题作文。

题 目:

Some people think smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 50 minutes to write a short essay on “Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places?”. You should write at least 250 words but no more than 300 words. Write your essay on the Answer Sheet.

实用语料

如何提出现象,导入话题

  1. China is the world’s largest cigarette producer and consumer.
  2. Currently, a new issue is coming into focus as a threat from tobacco usage—should smoking be banned in public places?

3. When people smoke in public, they put the health of others at risk. The dangers of secondhand smoking has been used to justify increasingly stringent restrictions on smoking in public places.

  1. Smoking remains a relatively universal phenomenon in public venues, which does jeopardize both the environment and public health. But it’s still quite common to see people lighting up in places where smoking is prohibited.

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如何分析支持派理由

  1. Tobacco smoke contains more than 7,000 chemicals. About 70 of them are known to cause cancer. Smoking is the top risk factor for lung cancer.
  2. Smokers have a three to four times greater risk of coronary heart disease than non-smokers, and have a nearly four times higher risk of cerebral hemorrhage and suffering a stroke.
  3. Smoking costs six million lives annually, according the World Health Organization, ten percent of whom are the victim of second-hand smoking.
  4. Reactions vary from mild eye irritation and sneezing to more threatening reactions, especially for predisposed individuals such as asthmatics, people with bronchitis and the elderly. Patients with angina pectoris who are exposed to carbon monoxide from cigarette smoke can tolerate less exercise before experiencing chest pain.
  5. Some studies now indicate that second hand smoke may be the second leading cause of lung cancer occurring in non-smokers.
  6. Thousands of cases of lung cancer and heart disease are attributed to secondhand smoking every year.
  7. Not to mention the cost to businesses and taxpayers to beautify streets, buildings and other public places that have been littered and damaged by smoking. These are some of the hidden costs of smoking.

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如何分析反对派理由

  1. Smokers feel they have the right to smoke any time and any place they choose. They feel that they are only hurting themselves. But the increasing evidence that side-stream smoke is posing a health threat to the people surrounding the smoker has opened up a whole new controversy.
  2. Many countries have laws that prohibit smoking in public places because it affects non-smokers as well. This damages non-smokers’ health against their will and might cause them lung cancer. But also it seems as though this law protects only one side and public places, which should be available to everyone for all purposes, meet only the needs of non-smokers.
  3. Also this is bad for tourism in some parts. Caterers are financially damaged by these new laws that suggest them to provide services to only one part of both residents and tourists. Is this law actually going to protect non-smokers or simply affect smokers? Is this a noble deed or a true act of discrimination?

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如何提出你自己的观点

  1. In my opinion, smoking in public places should be prohibited. Maybe smokers should have the right to smoke, but it’s not reasonable if that right is harmful to others. Obviously, if people smoke in public places, non-smokers have no choice but to become secondhand smokers. As a matter of fact, they have the right to choose not to be secondhand smokers.
  2. The authorities should coordinate to promote a smoking ban by various means, and strengthen enforcement teams with supervision and enforcement as strict as it is on drunk driving.
  3. While tuberculosis and infectious diseases are no longer the major health threats they used to be, degenerative diseases such as heart disease and cancers are now of major concern. With the possibility of smoking contributing to an increase of these diseases in non-smokers, society is becoming intolerant of cigarette smoking.
  4. The current law bans smoking in public places, but it does allow for designated smoking areas in places like bars, taverns and restaurants, provided these areas don’t take up more than 25% of the venue.

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小白老师既往作文预测

预测 1: 中医药国际化。详戳👇:

这个作文题,值得关注!

“中医药国际化”作文不会写?不用怕,万能句来了!

预测 2: 人工智能对医疗行业发展的影响。详戳👇:

这个作文题绝对是热点,每个考生都应该动笔写一下!

预测3:流感与普通感冒的区别。详戳👇:

就怕你一直努力,最后却输在作文上

预测4:在线教育是否会取代传统教育。详戳👇:

这个作文题,现在还真的有点火

又一波超级实用的作文预测万能句来了,快来抄作业吧!

预测5:阿兹海默症。详戳👇:

你总是不动笔,怎么可能学会写作文?

预测6 : 抑郁症主题。(已基本命中2020年浙江中医药大学作文题)详戳👇:

这个主题的作文居然还没有考过!想拿高分的进来!

抑郁症主题作文实用表达及万能句

往年已命中的作文预测

1. 抗生素滥用(已成功命中2019年全国统考作文题)👇:

2020年全国医学博士英语统一考试作文,被我公众号成功命中

必看|2020年全国医学博士英语统考作文题

这个主题的作文一定要写一写,上考场才有底气啊!

  1. 外卖与健康(已成功命中2019年全国统考作文题)

宁可错杀,不可放过!接地气的作文预测来一波!

  1. 雾霾与健康(已成功命中2017年全国统考作文题)

是时候积累点好词好句,为今年医博英语考试的作文热点话题做好准备了!

小白老师作文预测,欢迎转发,拒绝任何形式的抄袭与转载!

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常见问题

为什么‘公共场所禁烟’是值得准备的作文题?

因为该话题兼具公共健康意义与社会争议性,且近20年全国医博英语统考从未考过,符合命题趋势中的‘接地气’方向。

写这篇作文需要掌握哪些关键论据?

应掌握二手烟的健康危害数据(如致癌物数量、每年致死人数)、对特殊人群(如哮喘患者、老人)的影响,以及禁烟政策的经济与社会效益。

如何平衡支持与反对观点?

可先客观陈述吸烟者权利与行业顾虑,再以科学证据强调二手烟的非自愿暴露风险,最终主张在保障公共健康前提下实施合理禁烟措施。

有没有官方政策依据支持公共场所禁烟?

中国《公共场所控制吸烟条例》及《“健康中国2030”规划纲要》均明确提出加强控烟立法,多地已出台地方性禁烟法规。

参考资料

世界卫生组织关于烟草使用的事实简报

提供全球每年因吸烟及二手烟死亡人数等权威数据

《“健康中国2030”规划纲要》

国家层面推动公共场所控烟的政策依据

历年全国医学博士英语统一考试作文题汇总(2000–2021)

由小白英语公众号整理,用于论证‘公共场所禁烟’尚未考查